Indicative content guidance
Answers must be credited by using the level descriptors (below) in line with the
general marking guidance. The indicative content below exemplifies some of the
points that candidates may make but this does not imply that any of these must
be included. Other relevant points must also be credited.
Knowledge, Application, Analysis, Evaluation - indicative content
- Business failure can occur due to causes from inside the business, such
as poor management of cash flow, overestimating sales, poor
marketing, poor quality or overtrading
- Etsy may overestimate sales on its website and therefore commit too
many resources to advertising or expanding too quickly
- This could lead to a decrease in (operating) profit (from $118.2m in the
third quarter of 2020)
- Poor quality of handmade products is possible due to the high number
(3,681) of sellers Etsy allows to sell on its website, because it may not
be able to check they all meet a suitable standard
- As a result, Etsy may get a bad reputation for allowing those selling
poor quality products to trade on its website and the number of buyers
may fall from 69649 in the third quarter of 2020
- Allowing the change for other people to make products aside from the
sellers of the original designs could detract from the unique approach
that helped Etsy become successful previously
- However, Etsy has been trading for over 15 years and is now
well-established so overtrading is unlikely to lead to business failure
- Etsy has a healthy financial position, with a year-over-year increase in
gross profit margin of 8.2% in the third quarter of 2020 and so its
management of cash flow may not be a problem for the business
- If Etsy increases checks on the products available, it may prevent
problems occurring due to poor quality of products sold on its website
- Business failure may be more likely to occur due to external causes,
which are outside Etsy's control, such as market conditions or economic
factors
Level
Mark
Descriptor
0
No rewardable material.
Level 1
1-2
Isolated elements of knowledge and understanding - recall based.
Weak or no relevant application to business examples.
Generic assertions may be presented.
Level 2
3-5
Accurate knowledge and understanding.
Applied accurately to the business and its context.
Chains of reasoning are presented, showing cause(s) and/or effect(s)
but may be assertions or incomplete.
An attempt at an assessment is presented that is unbalanced and
unlikely to show the significance of competing arguments.
Level 3
6-8
Accurate and thorough knowledge and understanding, supported
throughout by relevant and effective use of the business
behaviour/context.
Logical chains of reasoning, showing cause(s) and/or effect(s).
Assessment is balanced, well contextualised, using quantitative and/or
qualitative information, and shows an awareness of competing
arguments/factors.
Question
Assess the benefits to Etsy of being an online business.
Indicative content